(three phrases in apposition)+(coordinating conjunction)+(subject/verb)+(participial phrase)+(participle)
Commuters crowding the roads, occupations molding the lives, commercials feeding the minds, and I smile at the sky, the money escaping from my hands, circling.
Pier extending from the sand, the marsh filling the foundation, the frog sitting in the corner, and I skip over the planks, big heads showing off their teeth, grinning.
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